good morning Dave from Everywhere.
Happy Monday, Fellas.Half hour left for Early Bird Shipping if you have anything in your CigarPlace cart.
Quote from: Texas Redfish on October 27, 2014, 08:55:34 AMQuote from: CigarGuy87 on October 27, 2014, 08:43:23 AMQuote from: sfish on October 27, 2014, 08:41:37 AMQuote from: dwgbryant on October 27, 2014, 08:28:11 AMoh, btw - I probably should tell you guys this lady cannot physically be 'intimate' because of her disabilities. she's just a good friend.Yes, you should have mentioned thatThese are critical details-here is an example of a story that needs a critical detail:I went for a run yesterday, went to ask the neighbor girl and she said she couldn't (she is in a wheelchair)<--KEY DETAIL! +1 CG hit the nail on the head. Not only did your story leave out the key detail but it seemed to go out of its way to avoid such detail thus giving everyone who reads it the wrong idea - you know kind of like a damn politician talking.These are Dean stories, why are you guys surprised?
Quote from: CigarGuy87 on October 27, 2014, 08:43:23 AMQuote from: sfish on October 27, 2014, 08:41:37 AMQuote from: dwgbryant on October 27, 2014, 08:28:11 AMoh, btw - I probably should tell you guys this lady cannot physically be 'intimate' because of her disabilities. she's just a good friend.Yes, you should have mentioned thatThese are critical details-here is an example of a story that needs a critical detail:I went for a run yesterday, went to ask the neighbor girl and she said she couldn't (she is in a wheelchair)<--KEY DETAIL! +1 CG hit the nail on the head. Not only did your story leave out the key detail but it seemed to go out of its way to avoid such detail thus giving everyone who reads it the wrong idea - you know kind of like a damn politician talking.
Quote from: sfish on October 27, 2014, 08:41:37 AMQuote from: dwgbryant on October 27, 2014, 08:28:11 AMoh, btw - I probably should tell you guys this lady cannot physically be 'intimate' because of her disabilities. she's just a good friend.Yes, you should have mentioned thatThese are critical details-here is an example of a story that needs a critical detail:I went for a run yesterday, went to ask the neighbor girl and she said she couldn't (she is in a wheelchair)<--KEY DETAIL!
Quote from: dwgbryant on October 27, 2014, 08:28:11 AMoh, btw - I probably should tell you guys this lady cannot physically be 'intimate' because of her disabilities. she's just a good friend.Yes, you should have mentioned that
oh, btw - I probably should tell you guys this lady cannot physically be 'intimate' because of her disabilities. she's just a good friend.
Good morning, BotL. I never even bothered looking last night so I didn't realize we had a jam going on until just now.
Quote from: BackyardSmoker on October 27, 2014, 09:33:29 AMHappy Monday, Fellas.Half hour left for Early Bird Shipping if you have anything in your CigarPlace cart.good morning Steve.
Quote from: A Friend of Charlie on October 27, 2014, 09:45:10 AMGood morning, BotL. I never even bothered looking last night so I didn't realize we had a jam going on until just now.does it really matter Tony? think about it.good morning.
Quote from: A Friend of Charlie on October 27, 2014, 09:45:10 AMGood morning, BotL. I never even bothered looking last night so I didn't realize we had a jam going on until just now.Morning, Tony. Nice game by Big Ben. Team's like Jekyll and Hyde though.
Quote from: Travellin Dave on October 27, 2014, 09:04:02 AMQuote from: Texas Redfish on October 27, 2014, 08:55:34 AMQuote from: CigarGuy87 on October 27, 2014, 08:43:23 AMQuote from: sfish on October 27, 2014, 08:41:37 AMQuote from: dwgbryant on October 27, 2014, 08:28:11 AMoh, btw - I probably should tell you guys this lady cannot physically be 'intimate' because of her disabilities. she's just a good friend.Yes, you should have mentioned thatThese are critical details-here is an example of a story that needs a critical detail:I went for a run yesterday, went to ask the neighbor girl and she said she couldn't (she is in a wheelchair)<--KEY DETAIL! +1 CG hit the nail on the head. Not only did your story leave out the key detail but it seemed to go out of its way to avoid such detail thus giving everyone who reads it the wrong idea - you know kind of like a damn politician talking.These are Dean stories, why are you guys surprised?details, details, details.sheesh.
Quote from: BackyardSmoker on October 27, 2014, 09:49:46 AMQuote from: A Friend of Charlie on October 27, 2014, 09:45:10 AMGood morning, BotL. I never even bothered looking last night so I didn't realize we had a jam going on until just now.Morning, Tony. Nice game by Big Ben. Team's like Jekyll and Hyde though.Maybe he's got a bumble bee fetish?
